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Lost Future Nanonymous No.13268 [D][U][F][S][L][A][C] >>13279 >>13304
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This is story for you written by me, please read it. I hope you enjoy it.

At one point of history, there was a successful, though very small kingdom hidden from other kingdoms in Freedom Land. If you’re interested, it was anarchic collection of different kingdoms, city states, villages that all were self governed and had different rules, so you might Imagine it was always dangerous and noisy there. The kingdom I want to tell story about was isolated, up to impossible to penetrate or even enter. Mind you, inhabitants weren’t elite – it was merely so well hidden it could safely breathe no one will try to influence or threaten independence. One you know context, let’s go into kingdom itself. Let me start with people, it was a caste system that segregated people into three categories: Lord were the most influential that were above the law and could do what they liked, questioning their behavior would be a sure way to die. Next, we have normal people I’ll call cattle (you’ll get why) and at the end of pyramid, marginalized group treated like second class citizens. They were called Copiers for how they would copy personas and apply on them. How would all these people live? Influential people would splurge on taxes from cattle, cattle would mainly work at simple jobs. Copiers would mostly live off donations or write, to get attention and make a living. Weird, huh? Why is the most oppressed group creating and not merely consuming? Who knows, that’s not important. Let’s say there was a few notable Copiers, one known to be schizophrenic. It’s debatable whether it was true, he claimed it was not like that. You probably get impression inhabitants in kingdom were happy. Well, Not really. Before kingdom got independent, it was heavily influenced by pariah people that were disrespected in all Freedom Land. They brought leafs from which you could extract quite yummy but not necessarily good herb – they called it Chosen. People went crazy after it. There was enough demand Lords could live off of taxes from Chosen alone. To make things worse, this herb was considered by some to be toxic, yet knowledge was so poor back then it was hard to proof. Now we return to one of the Copiers who knew it would ruin kingdom. Schizophrenic, or maybe looking into future, he could spot his beloved kingdom ruined, people killed and pride destroyed. Thought not presented directly, he could attribute it to Chosen, herb loved by cattle. They didn’t know better so who he was to tell them it can kill? According to him, it could take very long time before victim would realized he lost his chance in life. With his crippled skill, he decided to pursue creating art making herb killing. He would create lots of it to make sure all people are aware of it. Very few supported him, other Copiers would isolate him even more. But he was pushing forward to make sure kingdom is free off Chosen. Lords weren’t as enthusiastic. At first, they would censor his works. Then, it this didn’t work, set cattle against him. But he pushed, he continued even with knowledge he would be even more isolated. He more lonely lad, but certainly not egoistic. He was doing it for years, in his prime time, he dedicated his time to help. Cattle didn’t care about it and mostly threw leftovers of Chosen on him to humiliate him. He was also abusing this herb, but after learning truth from the future he stopped. One of the Lords would oppress him just to get cattle on his side. Once he would go to outskirts to Copier place where he sold art and provoke him, using cattle, into giving up. Fight broke up, apparently Lord got hurt and all the blame was on Copier. Using assault as a pretext, Lord, which was very corrupted, decided for very drastic measure – capital punishment. It was too much of making people stop using herb that he decided to kill lonely Copier. He would get onto Public place, humiliated on the eyes of cattle with tortures, and finally beheaded for having different belief than others. No one would support them on death trial.

As he foreseen, kingdom got ruined by the same herb Lords would make people consume. It has lost its place in history and is remembered as a reminder why Chosen, or any other addicted substance should never be consumed by the cattle.

After reading this story, you probably know what I wanted to say with Lords, Copier and Chosen. Sadly, it’s the cattle that will decide.

Nanonymous No.13269 [D][U][F]
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didn't read, unreadable wall of text, if you can't into paragraphs then don't write

Nanonymous No.13270 [D] >>13274
This is story for you written by me, please read it. I hope you enjoy it.

At one point of history, there was a successful, though very small kingdom hidden from other kingdoms in Freedom Land. If you’re interested, it was anarchic collection of different kingdoms, city states, villages that all were self governed and had different rules, so you might Imagine it was always dangerous and noisy there.

The kingdom I want to tell story about was isolated, up to impossible to penetrate or even enter. Mind you, inhabitants weren’t elite – it was merely so well hidden it could safely breathe no one will try to influence or threaten independence. One you know context, let’s go into kingdom itself.

Let me start with people, it was a caste system that segregated people into three categories: Lord were the most influential that were above the law and could do what they liked, questioning their behavior would be a sure way to die.

Next, we have normal people I’ll call cattle (you’ll get why) and at the end of pyramid, marginalized group treated like second class citizens. They were called Copiers for how they would copy personas and apply on them. How would all these people live? Influential people would splurge on taxes from cattle, cattle would mainly work at simple jobs. Copiers would mostly live off donations or write, to get attention and make a living.

Weird, huh? Why is the most oppressed group creating and not merely consuming? Who knows, that’s not important.

Let’s say there was a few notable Copiers, one known to be schizophrenic. It’s debatable whether it was true, he claimed it was not like that. You probably get impression inhabitants in kingdom were happy. Well, Not really. Before kingdom got independent, it was heavily influenced by pariah people that were disrespected in all Freedom Land.

They brought leafs from which you could extract quite yummy but not necessarily good herb – they called it Chosen. People went crazy after it. There was enough demand Lords could live off of taxes from Chosen alone. To make things worse, this herb was considered by some to be toxic, yet knowledge was so poor back then it was hard to proof. Now we return to one of the Copiers who knew it would ruin kingdom.

Schizophrenic, or maybe looking into future, he could spot his beloved kingdom ruined, people killed and pride destroyed. Thought not presented directly, he could attribute it to Chosen, herb loved by cattle. They didn’t know better so who he was to tell them it can kill? According to him, it could take very long time before victim would realized he lost his chance in life. With his crippled skill, he decided to pursue creating art making herb killing.

He would create lots of it to make sure all people are aware of it. Very few supported him, other Copiers would isolate him even more. But he was pushing forward to make sure kingdom is free off Chosen. Lords weren’t as enthusiastic. At first, they would censor his works. Then, it this didn’t work, set cattle against him.

But he pushed, he continued even with knowledge he would be even more isolated. He more lonely lad, but certainly not egoistic. He was doing it for years, in his prime time, he dedicated his time to help. Cattle didn’t care about it and mostly threw leftovers of Chosen on him to humiliate him. He was also abusing this herb, but after learning truth from the future he stopped. One of the Lords would oppress him just to get cattle on his side.

Once he would go to outskirts to Copier place where he sold art and provoke him, using cattle, into giving up. Fight broke up, apparently Lord got hurt and all the blame was on Copier. Using assault as a pretext, Lord, which was very corrupted, decided for very drastic measure – capital punishment.

It was too much of making people stop using herb that he decided to kill lonely Copier. He would get onto Public place, humiliated on the eyes of cattle with tortures, and finally beheaded for having different belief than others.

No one would support them on death trial.

As he foreseen, kingdom got ruined by the same herb Lords would make people consume. It has lost its place in history and is remembered as a reminder why Chosen, or any other addicted substance should never be consumed by the cattle.

After reading this story, you probably know what I wanted to say with Lords, Copier and Chosen. Sadly, it’s the cattle that will decide.

Nanonymous No.13272 [D][U][F]
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I would add that grammar is broken too. Well, there at least
> As he foreseen, kingdom got ruined by the same herb Lords would make people consume. It has lost its place in history and is remembered as a reminder why Chosen, or any other addicted substance should never be consumed by the cattle.
It is the only sentence I actually read though. Sorry, but it's clear that you struggle with using English. Please refrain from writing until you're good at it.

Nanonymous No.13274 [D][U][F]
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>>13270
didn't read, if you can't into paragraphs then don't write

Nanonymous No.13278 [D] >>13279
Yeah there's a some typos, but I'm able to read it.

The fact that you woke ass English nerds can't read it, makes YOUR ability questionable.

I give it a clap clap.

It sounds like early America, maybe referencing Tobacco or some other addictive drug?
Or maybe it's the present day, and he's talking about opioids or all drugs combined.

WE NEED THEORIES OR ANSWERS!

Nanonymous No.13279 [D]
>>13268
nice fanfiction
>>13278
nanon i don't know how to tell you...

Nanonymous No.13280 [D]
there is as much multiverse inside us as outside us. there is no herb that kills everyone, herbs will be varying degrees of helpful and harmful depending on the individual interacting with it

Nanonymous No.13281 [D]
interacting with them, when they are mixtures of plants

Nanonymous No.13282 [D]
dale pendell's books pharmako poeia, dynamis, and gnosis are worth considering. also true hallucinatioms and the archaic revival by terrence mckenna. erowid.org has a very extensive library list of botany books, focused on entheogens.

worth noting is that i personally believe the spirit can transcend the body and carry on into other dimensions. humanoids would think the person has died because the physical body is unresponsive on their layer of reality, but the person's soul may be alive on their soul journeys. happens very often perhaps? anyway your story is interesting yet i feel there are always lots of plants in play. nanon mentioned tobacco and opiods, others might presume cocaine or ayhuasca or peyote or marijuana. some villify datura, deer enjoy it. then there are intense entheogens. i like floral entheogens, others like magic mushrooms. they are on their paths and i am on mine. what helps them might harm me, and vice-versa. plant selection monoculture seems unlikely, so many thousands of plants in the markets, those wise enough to identify highly-healing plants for wide populaces are likely to recommend variety, personal discovery and individuation, and a broad selection of plants worth considering-- these are actions most people do socially. thanks for writing an interesting and thought-provoking story, hope the responses are to your liking

Nanonymous No.13283 [D]
I tried to compress the text for those who didn't understand:

>There was a place called "Freedom Land". This place had many kingdoms, one of those was very small and 'hidden' from the others.
>This kingdom was a Micro Monarchy, with people paying taxes (the "cattle"), the all-powerful Lord and another class called "Copiers" (the ones that would 'copy' personas and use them).
>You might think this Kingdom was very happy, a true paradise, since it was hidden from the others. But the kingdom started to be influenced by "pariah" people, which brought strange leafs.
>The 'cattle' called it "Chosen" and used these leafs to make a extract, which was very 'yummy'.
>The population got addicted to it to this herb very fast and soon everybody in the kingdom was using it.
>One of the "Copiers" realised this herb was toxic and would eventually destroy the whole kingdom. To stop it, he tried to show that to the Cattles.
>The Cattle thought he was crazy, schizophrenic, and got aggressive and humiliated him, throwing leftovers from their "Chosen extract" at him.
>He didn't gave up, and after years studying in isolation the Lords decided to censor his work, since they were receiving taxes from the herb and he represented a threat to the wealth of the Lords.
>To force him giving up from his work about the toxicity of the herb, the Lords organized a 'protest' using the addicted Cattle people.
>It didn't worked out very well and the protest developed into a 'war' scenario.
>The Lord himself got hurt and decided to put the blame on the schizophrenic "Copier".
>He decided for 'capital punishment' and public torture for the amusement of the "Cattle" people.
>As the schizophrenic Copier predicted, the kingdom got destroyed by the herb in the end. He was killed for trying to show their own demise.


5/10 fanfic.
This might be the antipornfag. If it is: you're not a messiah. Porn will not destroy our 'kingdom'. Fuck off.

Nanonymous No.13304 [D][U][F]
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>>13268
Come back and try again when you've learnt to write proper English.

Nanonymous No.13394 [D]
I’m trying to learn Japanese, so I feel sympathetic about you sucking at English. I tried to correct it into more proper English, but its still written in a way where it doesn’t seem like you’re telling a story. You should read parts of a history textbook to get a hold on the proper tone of voice.


This is story for you written by me, please read it. I hope you enjoy it.

At one point of history, there was a successful, though very small kingdom hidden from the other kingdoms of Freedom Land. Freedom Land, if you were wondering, was an unorganized collection of different kingdoms, city states, villages that all were self governed and had different rules, so you might imagine it was always dangerous and noisy there.

The kingdom I want to tell story about was isolated, up to impossible to penetrate or even enter. The inhabitants weren’t elitists. It was merely so well isolated its inhabitants and its culture was largely left unmolested. No one would try to influence or threaten its independence. Now that you know the context, let’s get into the kingdom itself.

Let me start with people. It was a caste system that segregated people into three categories. Lords were the most influential. They were above the law and could do whatever they liked, questioning their behavior would be certain death.

Next, we have the normal people I’ll call Cattle (you will soon learn why). At the bottom of the pyramid, there was a marginalized group that was treated like second class citizens. They were called Copiers

>because they would copy personas and apply on them.
What do you mean by this?

How did all these people live together? Influential people would splurge on taxes from cattle, the cattle would mainly do the simple jobs. Copiers would mostly live off donations or write to get attention and make a living.

Weird, huh? Why would the most oppressed group be creating and not merely consuming? Who knows, that’s not important.

There were a few notable Copiers, one known to be schizophrenic. It’s debatable whether he really was. He claimed to not be. You might get impression that the inhabitants of the kingdom were happy. Well, not really. Before kingdom gained its independence, it was heavily influenced by pariahs that were disrespected by all of Freedom Land.

They brought leaves from which you could extract a quite tasty but not necessarily healthy herb – They called it Chosen. People went crazy after it. There was enough demand for the Lords to live off of taxes from Chosen alone. To make things worse, this herb was considered by some to be toxic, yet knowledge was so poor back then it was hard to prove. Now we return to one of the Copiers who knew it would ruin the kingdom.

The schizophrenic had a vision, either of the future or of pure delusion. He saw his beloved kingdom ruined, his people killed and their pride destroyed. Though it wasn't obvious, he traced it back to Chosen. When the he told the Cattle, they didn't believe him. Who was he, a lowly Copier to speak about the dangers of the herb? According to him, it could take very long time before the victim realized he lost his chance in life. With his crippled skill, he decided to create art to promote the prohibition of Chosen.

He made lots of art to promote awareness of the issue. Very few supported him, other Copiers turned their backs on him and left him even more isolated in his mission. But he kept pushing forward to make sure kingdom was free off Chosen. The Lords weren’t accepting of his ideas. At first, they tried to censor his works. This didn’t work, so the Lords set the cattle against him.

Once he went to the outskirts to of where the Copiers lived and where he sold his art. The lords tried to provoke him using the Cattle into giving up. Soon, a fight broke out. Supposedly, a Lord got hurt and all the blame was on the Copier. Using assault as the pretext, the Lord, which was very corrupted, decided to take very drastic measures – capital punishment.

He had had enough of the Copier trying to get people to stop using Chosen, and he saw killing the Copier as the only way out. The Copier was pushed into public, tortured with thousands of Cattle watching him, and finally beheaded.

No one supported him during the trial.

Just as he foresaw, the kingdom got ruined by the same herb the Lords would make people consume. It has lost its place in history and is remembered as a reminder of why Chosen, or any other addictive substance should never be consumed by the Cattle.

After reading this story, you probably know who I was talking about with the Lords, the Copier and Chosen. Sadly, it’s the Cattle that will decide.