>>12206 >>12207 >>12208 >>12209 This review was a lot bigger than I expected. I wanted to do something slightly special since this episode is kind of important (Arguably the most important besides the opening two parters in lore this season.). Though I also didn't want to do anything overly complicated. So I figured, "eh, I'll just write down my thoughts on each Cutie Mark story as is in a casual manner." Probably with some rewording for succinctness I could've fit this into two parts over three (or four, if you count Odds and Ends). >Alright, brain disorderly, *Cough: >first four stories are labled "cutie mark story" but Pinkie Pie's is labeled "Pinkie Pie's story". >Rainbow Dash is just Rainbow Dash in Rainbow text >Inconsistent capitalization of my lists >Sonic Rainbooms as a weapon >Spike's Previous Zip Lining Experience Along with some grammatical errors like this. Yeah, I've been scatterbrained. Though a lot of my reviews are trainwrecks a bit this one feels more glaring for whatever reason. I am often in a bit of a rush to do it before being distracted, I will note. Maybe I should finally take the chatgpt pill for copy editing? (Or could I use a local LLM? Will see what I can run on weaker hardware). Anyways, I still like this format and will be trying it again if the opportunity arises, just with a bit more quality control hopefully.
