Anon 05/30/2018 (Wed) 04:30:17 No.1455 del
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>>1453
>I didn´t know how to start this one and I wrote this really fast, it´s surprising that this doesn´t feel awkward.

You didn't intent that? I thought you meant Luna had written it in the heat of the moment. It actually came out quite well honestly. I liked the vibe I got from that.

>I wondered when I could start this thing and finally I took the step and make some plans about it. The next stories will hopefully be more down to earth and less over the edge thoughts.

Go whever your heart takes you, yeah that may sound gay and retarded but I mean that. Don't fear it being low quality and focus on personal satisfaction. It's supposed to be a bit of an experiment anyways.

>may the darkness calm down us and take quieter thoughts for everything else. I hope to convey that feeling despite the tensions during and behind the story.

I actually have been thinking about that to. The quiet of the dark leading somepony to a revelation... maybe one that can't handle well, yet can't go back to before. Yeah, you did a pretty good job conveying that this time around.

>>1446
>a nightmare.....in the moon

This is my favorite line. It's like she was actively thinking about the words and how they related to her current state. How she was a nightmare in the moon and that being the seed for the name. I know it's a small and perhaps unintended detail but that's what I drew from it.