Anon 06/03/2018 (Sun) 22:14:51 No.1474 del
>>1454
>You seem to be actually showing Luna's perspective while still having it go to a possibly ominous place. Usually fics I see have such rebellion either justified or mostly justified and have characters being quite self righteous.
I just wrote it in a time when I shouldn´t have spent writing on it.But as that time was going to be wasted so those regrets of feeling wasted because of personal trouble then came out with this.
>I haven't seen all fics and can't give and my perspective isn't fully comprehensive, I can say that I rarely see such point of views with emotional validity yet still being morally questionable, especially with somepony like Luna.
me neither and the worst thing is that this material has been overdone during the years. I am adding nothing new but questionable points to someone´s morals. All the art has been focused on these two, so take it as personal view of them and not a masterpiece like Lullaby for A Princess. In fact, I have not seen it. No fanfics read over this, I just simply know Luna is way too overexposed and this doesn´t cross nor achieves more than political statements and how to manipulate a society.

> I don't want to pressure you to deliver on something you didn't plan to do, I still must say good job!
Unfortunately, while you are going to see the part that shouldn´t have come after it. Take a huge time lapse after it because as soon as I wrote the beginning, the next one followed immediately.

>I could tell you where writing it based on some things you said/done. I have found myself writing stuff channeling personal experiences (or at least emotional states) way more then I thought I would, even stuff that I'm not necessarily willing to talk about freely.
basically I have put some thoughts to a certain member of my family who I shouldn´t care about that matter yet I have to do because it´s my family.Instead of looking like a crybaby, I try to put them in context and reflect something else around the way instead of trying to feel so open at exposing emotions. Yet, they appear at some point
>an inane story of Dolores fighting a losing war against living corn with several mid level obscure us congress members and psychic snail that bleeds fire.
top kek
normally real life stuff with ponies doesn´t work unless you apply it in their universe with some care in putting the concept. Rebellious things can perfectly come but more like implied or with different enemies around. I think that idea came because of a disappointing political news or events during that point around the US.
>an organic flow of her consciousness and confusion. I can picture Celestia reading it. I can picture Luna writing it, with a mix of emotions and perhaps unstable penmanship.
I haven´t thought about that. Even when politicians are young, they have enough skill to write properly. But that nervous feel and even uncomfortable time at writing it could come out of it.
Truly a nice touch that I hadn´t pictured.

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