>>1539
>my advise is to simply experiment and see where it goes. if you fall into a pattern or feel you need to broaden your horizons you can always try something else new. Its all still new to after all.
I have experimented a lot in this one. It´s the first time I write it in the original language and then translate it in order to be more specific and go through details in the 2nd writing.
>Cool. I certainly like the concept.
You are going to see something similar in this fic.
>May the bridge be with you anon.
It definitely is with me
>>1540
I am having those problems too.
>>1545
>At least it doesn't look like there is any weird boting stuff right now.
It would bring some weird activity and have the eye of the mods for a while, not everything are inconveniences but it´s something that I would prefer not to happen.

>Really haven't noticed ya repeating the same words too often, but than again I don't have the best eye for such things. Anycase any increase in quality is welcome.
Well, for this one I have tried to make it more diverse. I only hope that emotions don´t get drowned in between the descriptions.
>so it's one of there relatives?
I think someone has shot at the right target.