>>1785
the perfect symmetry of the bridges. The ultimate weapon of perfection. The funniest thing is that this edit could be uploaded on Derpi (no joking)

>It isn't much, just trying to give an idea on where this could go to bring her into fully cute territory.
a shitpost is a shitpost. Either way, taking care of a shitpost makes it a little bit different but still. The nostrils and the line for telling her hooves really makes her a symmetrical figure instead of looking cheap for shitposting in the /mlp/ catalog.

Even though it´s not a bad effort,I didn´t expect you edited this one. >>1787.

>Feels like it's going somewhere but not quite to anyplace I'd call true improvement or another take.
I tried to edit the picture with something else but the cold edit was the coolest look I found for this picture. Monochromatic cold and doing a simple edit to bring something out of this dark picture.

>Something akin to this almost mono-purple would feel good for a flash back or some kind of more darker story though.
eeeyup and it truly shows. Even though the purple effect seems somewhat unnatural on paper, the moon color and contrast gives it a little bit more of variation to take the next step. Not sure if it´s for a flashback but she sure looks vibrant and menacing at the same time. Also, now that I am comparing them, the eyes for sure look intimating in your edit, so I would suggest to keep yours. Congratulations.

I couldn´t avoid editing this picture because Luna looking like an evil creature without transforming into Nightmare Moon is not that common.