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>I did draw from politics but actually didn't intend for it to be a full direct commentary, but it is indeed there isn't it?
it can be easily interpreted as that. Mostly because of the times we are living in and I won´t lie, the situation here is awfully similar to the USA just that it keeps the violence aside and only try to hope that only words and actions end up this mess.

So yeah, I take the fic as a commentary because I know where you come from and what your fears might be (taking previous posts into account). In context, it feels like that. However, I praise the attempt at trying to describe it with a narration of multiperspectives even if they come from the protagonist´s mouth.

>There is a lose idea to a squeal that also would have some political connections but it would take me a long time to explain without spolier, plus not the highest priority at the moment.
that´s a bullet that you can use for another day.

>I'd imagine be very hard to fully remove that status. Even to the very end the discontent that I generated I'm not sure is enough to remove them and you'd have a problem with different areas having different levels of support, plus there would still be many ponies more fearful of change than ready to abandon a thousand year constant ruler.
plus, they cannot die and have lived eternally. So yeah, I think taking them to the prison can change one´s mind and think about such actions. You are mentioning that some ponies still love that monarchy and without that system, it would feel as a blank page in which freedom scares a lot to the traditionalists. It would take time and a generation or two to fully accept it.

>This is a work influenced by /endpone/. I specifically was thinking of your writing style when writing this.
Look, I don´t know how I have managed to write all of this in retrospective. I will say it again, hearing that someone gets an influence from me is just way outlandish to my expectations. I have always stood out for being a supportive column instead of placing myself as an important influence. I have rated it high as well because the influences combine everything for a traditional way of writing.

However, I say that you can get better because your style will develop and detour from mine so I said that you have the base but from now on,it all depends on where you want to go. I will write and influence you on whatever aspect you want to pick on but I cannot control how much one will take from each other. That´s the art of recontextualizing a message for your vision.