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>The greatest story ever put to digital paper
lmao, the sarcasm are very present lately in your posts.

>When I said this was underwhelming I meant it.
not as much as you may think.

>There really isn't much to say other than I tried to make this fic out of utter desire to make one in an hour.
just an hour....that doesn´t leave much time to consider and reread what you have written save spitting out all you had in mind.

>it is an early prototype for something else I've been planing for a little while.
it looks like that because there are a few questions that make me think where you got them and why you would get there.

>There is another prototype that is coming fortunately that will be more worth commenting on ( it's a little strange but more thought out) and I wouldn't said anything if I didn't have something else to bring to the table.
well, that´s up to you in the way you want to promote it. If you feel like accompanying that prototype along with this, well, double the prize I guess.