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>Wow. That's an archivement.
yeah, I mean, I didn´t think that I could dedicate myself for writing stories for this series but I suppose that...if one doesn´t want to blogpost all the time, this medium serves as a cure to avoid that practice. I didn´t imagine to be capable of writing around 7.5k words in one single day(7571 to be exact, I have just checked them). I have written more than both parts of The Mirror of Fire combined and that fic was fragmented in two different months.
However, quantity doesn´t equal quality and it´s not recommended to write long stories if one doesn´t have enough skills for entertaining or engaging the reader for it. If any message or moral wants to be transmitted, there have to be certain questions or stimulant parts that guide that reader until the very end of said story.

>Even if it doesn't translate well that still sounds pretty cool.
probably in its themes it will remain mostly untouched. I´ll explain it either way just to make it more interesting.

>I actually may relate as their was a fic I read long ago were I was inspired by the pose and structure itself.
well, everyone gets the influence from somewhere and why not, other fics that are correctly written or pieces whose style manages to catch all the attention for making so special. I went for the safe option, visiting a little bit the recognized authors from the past.

>Take a couple of days to rest than revisit the translation with a clear head would be my only advice.
yeah. I was exhausted yesterday when I left that PoLS but the good side of that overkill is that I´ve got the story completely defined and structured. I might change lines of dialogue or reword the expressions, but the core messages and the general draft is already written and I can definitely take a break mentally speaking. When one implies the story that he´s about to write, the idea might change over time if it isn´t written but in this case, that didn´t happen. I have that series of events already defined and my mind can focus on other things instead of asking myself where this story could arrive at.

I have applied that advice today and will be doing that tomorrow as well. It´s a matter of time and a good revision/translation before sharing it both here and on Fimfiction after your review.