>>5772 >Sounds like a good plan for you. I will continue with the fic review why the delay? New section to it! PoLS what I don't know is your plan though. You have been mentioning it so many times that I am not waiting for it just to see if you are going to praise the fic or rip it apart, what genuinely picks my interest up is that you have seen something that I didn't foresee and I am wondering what perspective you are shaping with that story.
The story is (relatively) long indeed but I am certainly looking for your comments about it rather than the praise/negativity towards it. Whatever the score is,the fic must have transmitted something to you that doesn't rely on my hooves right now. I suppose that sharing things in public offers an open door to chaotic situations...
