For those who expect shipping in this fic, a little warning here. L23 04/24/2020 (Fri) 20:54:47 No.5823 del
you should take into account that I haven´t set this entire story up for a romantic story. It does convey the feeling that I am going to ship them and in the course of those two weeks living together, they have developed a connection between them. If we connect that the protagonist was regretting his past actions, delivering an image of a romantic character (apparently), the premise exposed on FimFiction and the cover image >>5429, then we can perfectly conclude that this story was meant for shipping.

Nonetheless, we cannot forget that I criticized before with Cloud Zapper this practice of shipping:
>>5421
>“What could anyone expect from you? A guard that simply stares romantically at other guards or even passes time at imagining love stories with Twilight under the pseudonym named “Zephyr”? It´s no wonder that all of this would happen sooner or later ....

or even Bluestar himself accuses the commander for doing that with Cadence:
>>5421
>“Who are you then for delivering exemplariness of honour and loyalty? If you Cloud Zapper kept a relationship in secret with Princess Cadence while we were replacing the Crystal army for a few days?

so this...seems to go on a rough territory here. If there is any outsider who reads this story as the average fanfic meant for shipping characters and self-inserting OCs for autistic reasons. Be careful with that mindset beforehand because later on, we have lines as these where we expose that the protagonist is completely meaningless to this universe:

>>5426
>Remember the loss of a character that never existed in this escape; inside the minds of a few I will live, no hope will be recovered for being naïve, proud for ending in this lonely yet beautiful landscape.

or even Stella:
>>5437

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