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> Darkness is beautiful but it cannot be alone too much as the main thing. Too little makes you feel nothing,too much makes you lazy and tired.

Some of the fics that I've enjoyed the most were dark in tone, but necessarily in theme. I just wanted to have a great contrast/throw people off for a stronger payoff. But It would probably be a bit easier if I toned down some, if I ever write it that is.

>When you care about the build up,you prevent a lot of Deux Ex Machinas,but you also risk youself in losing the interest of some people who are hungry for the active/dramatic part.

That is somethig I noticed a lot of movies doing of late. No 3 act build up, just ACTION, then ACTION the even moar ACTION! Ohhh, awe at are special effects! That is something that threw me off for latest new star wars films.

>btw that Twilight is cute,I love how bats could serve as alternate alicorns from nature and not artifically ascended or extraordinary ponies

You know, never thought of bat pone unicorns being a way to have all natural non super powered alicorns. I don't know why I have never noticed this.

Bat Alicorn Twily is cute isn't she?