Anonymous 11/06/2019 (Wed) 05:47:57 No.31937 del
>>31931
Good effort. But imo these one-sentence descriptions don't really say that much--only convey the loosest of links. My approach is usually with something like this is not to get into the nasty stuff at first blush, espec wo much evidence. Just report very neutrally the bare bones of what happened:
"family of nine slain in Mexico allegedly by cartel" of something like that.
Let the memory of the tragedy pass--and more details come out. If the details are shocking, then wrote moar of an expose-like description.
(BTW, most of those UK pubs are worse than the Post, kek.)
just my two cents worth