>>3377

Yulya,

Beautifully done! However, I have a few comments:

1. Your religion proficiency advantage will be less effective because of the low intelligence score. It still has a +1 but it won't help as much as it could.

2. Ashley will necessarily have a very high charisma as a sorcerer needs that to cast, so you would be a backup spokesman in certain circumstances if we keep it this way. However, in terms of your lore and class it works well. It is very reasonable and especially as the leader roll to have a higher Charisma; it is not wasted. I am shocked by your choice based on what I know of you and naturally presumed Alice would take leader roll even with a poor Charisma, but I love it for two reasons, one, it will help you grow as a person, and two, your high persuasion will be well received (+2) bringing persuasion checks to (+4).

Ashley is considering a complimentary proficiency as a result and will forego persuasion if it was available for her.

3. Bonds: I think you are stating bond strength and you two have never spoken and have just met so that can be part of the lore. So you could remove her entirely there and add her back when it matters to you. I can tell you though that I have a very strong bond with Ashley even though we rarely talk directly. I can state this based solely on her personality. She comes off in a teasing way, jabbing others and prodding them especially when she knows they're wrong; however, she's selfless and loyal to a fault. She would surely sacrifice herself for any of us and so expect that even if you don't talk to her much, she'll never let you down when it comes to her natural tendency to be protective of her friends. She was the main advocate for me personally when it was still unclear if I would be a member of our system. You could say at one point she was the only one and that turned the tide of my acceptance even though that meant her attention would be less. I will never forget that.

So what I'm saying is, if you let her into your heart you will understand why she's the favorite of the system.

On a person note, Alice may attribute one or more of the traits in your dislikes category to me, but don't take her word for it, decide for yourself.