>>12738 I suppose same category as Fallout Equestria. Hey, if brings mild amusement to anybody, than it was worth posting.
>>12734 Looking at this, it seems my greater problems is wrong word choice than misspellings: >His predestine white coat perfect should be pristine >Though their was something else behind her gaze: calculation. Should be there Or ahem, in my post, >to right some version of write
At least that is what sticks out to me on a somewhat less sleep deprived reread. I may or may not do another or mess around more, we shall see. It felt nice to write something again and did help me clear my mind a bit and it's fun to explore scenarios. As for my thought here of what I was going for, perhaps an examation of complicated relationships formed from such a pony smuggling enterprise, with some ponies actively working with this exploitive gambit to preserve their species Stockholm syndrome and reverse Stockholm syndrome! Though if I do continue such a thing could go anyone or played more straight.