Anon 12/04/2018 (Tue) 22:54:53 No.2718 del
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> can die happily after reading this then. I wanted to introduce Daybreaker into the actual world and put transmit that grey zone again like I did in past fics. It´s obvious that I had to add a slice of edginess to it because the evil side has to intimidate and lead into an uncomfortable direction.
There has to be some. Even if you stay strictly with only what's portrayed on screen, we still have things like Tempest and Tirek. I'd almost say it'd be a disservice if you didn't have a bit of edge for her tbh. Though I don't know the future, I'd say right now ya nailed it.

>But yeah, that attraction comes because Daybreaker is showing, in all the fic, since Celestia has absorbed her, she is placed in two sides constantly but the circumstances still influence a lot ....well,she´s made of fire and I tried to correlate that hot appearance with an obscure background story she had long ago. Also with her obsession of trying to forget about her yet a certain part of her appears "for no reason" when it has an actual root to her identity.
A question I have is that if there is any part a denial of nature vs a corruption. I would take me a long time to word what I mean and maybe beyond the scope of this fic's goal, so I'll explain later.