>>2718 >There has to be some. Even if you stay strictly with only what's portrayed on screen, we still have things like Tempest and Tirek. I'd almost say it'd be a disservice if you didn't have a bit of edge for her tbh. this sparks an idea of writing a story about Daybreaker acting as the cute/nice side and Celestia as the tyrannic side....or at least draw a pic of putting both sides conflicted in a reverse world. I get what you mean. It´s that I was worried about stepping too much into the zone for its own good. Like trying to convey that dark feel without giving unnecessary tense vibes that escalate extremely into cliched edgy stories. If I try to break the rules, I should know them first
>Though I don't know the future, I'd say right now ya nailed it. well, that´s really surprising for a relatively spontaneous move. The next parts are going to feel different in comparison....who knows...
>if there is any part a denial of nature vs a corruption. I would take me a long time to word what I mean and maybe beyond the scope of this fic's goal, so I'll explain later. yeah, I think you are trying to ask about that mirror part, like revealing herself for something that has styed hidden all the time. Then, that secret goes out and get revealed in public and one should consider several measures as soon as it appears. It´s kind of both and I will mention it later in the fic buuuuut here is the actual problem, I don´t know much about Celestia´s backstory considering the huge amount of years she has lived. That´s a big deal because I can certainly headcanon rational stories that could have happened to her yet I don´t know the origins of both evil entities (more about NMM than Daybreaker). All of this leads me into playing a little bit with the different tones of grey but not knowing quite where the actual root comes from because it´s still left unexplained (as far as I know).
>>2719 >Me neither, despite the scope of my project. I like that attitude of just letting it happen. Wise mindset. yeah me too. people like natural works that come from one self these days. For artificial perspectives and fake realism, we already have the edit thread. Even if you could hack my computer to get into the Endchan texts folder, there is no 3rd part written so far.
