Anon 12/01/2019 (Sun) 21:46:40 No.5132 del
>>5108
>>5109
so as far as I can imply here, I won´t go too far because it feels like a wishful thinking, Bridgefag has shown several times an unexploited love for verses and while this isn´t the first time he takes it seriously, I would say that this is far from spontaneous. Despite using the uncertain emotions that he has shared on /endpone/ over time, there is a peculiar characteristic here:

These verses complement each other because they express two wildly different perspectives:

One rejects harmony, expressing feelings of powerlessness, boredom and defiance towards the path of having a moral code). The 2nd post shows a more nostalgic perspective towards a past that the narrator had in those times shared with that being, acknowledging that despite the period that event that lead her to get there, the narrator realizes about developing some moral over time that has lead to such reflections and thinking about her, showing signs of empathy and wondering how she is doing these days.

I could go further with this but considering that this is so far an introduction, I can appreciate the fact that this is written with two opposite voices that could clash at some point if they met again, with a 1st person narrative.


>>5112
>I have a fic and a couple of smaller things to post but that will come in a bit. Hopefully I can get this figured out.
well but at least...

>>5113
>>5129

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