The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape by the Bridgefag >>5108

So i have been reading a couple of times your fic and we´ve got to make clear a couple of things beforehand:

1.This fic was written with Endchan´s format in mind. Now,this might work perfectly for this site, considering the variety of colours that this imageboard can offer but as soon as you post it on FIMFiction, read it on Word or even posted as a green on /mlp/, it can become certainly confusing at first sight, especially when it comes to these two posts >>5185 and >>5186. This is probably my biggest criticism and problem towards this fic because technically it´s really well written for a 1st person narrative but this might lead to a problem due to the lack of "I said" or "Star 1 answered".

2. The reader has to take into account these lined from yours >>5188 before reviewing it or even giving a rating:
>a certain implication that I had seen at the very start of the show.
>Though it's not her natural state it still gives a tiny thread to the idea of stars being a distinct other entity from a far away sun.
>Me toying around with what is there as an idea to see what it could be like.
so the average fan who has read the IDW comics might imply that this Cosmos that you are exposing here is in her draconequus form when the theory from yours exposes that from an heliocentric perspective (which makes sense considering how much Equestria relies on both the sun and the moon), the symbolism taken from The Mare In the Moon implies that Cosmos was created because of Luna´s orbit and not because of the Andalusian constellation, unless said constellation coincidentally happens to be that one. It´s just far too much of a coincidence to be true and even if IDW writers wanted to be that twisted, they could mess it up easily and confuse even more the readers with the first time of meeting her.

Any fan who reads this has to take these lines into account before diving into your fic and get immersed by your idea. From here, the interpretations and subjective views should vary. The technical points and context explanations end here.