I am not the best at judging texts and interpreting stories but I must say that it´s quite well written by using those descriptions that you have been exposing in these fics. It almost seems like you are in your comfort zone while typing those parts. I cannot be the only one pointing out that your descriptions do hold a pattern between getting philosophical and explaining the context.
So, the main character here is Cosmos (pink text) and comes in a 1st person narrative. We see from her that her old age has made her bored of her existence as a single star. It´s quite odd to have a disembodied protagonist that is yet to get some form and if this were animated, we would have to perceive a distinct visual aspect from her or some signs besides her character.
So what we see here are these aspects from the introduction: >My adventures. My exploits. My travels across the... Cosmos a justification of her name >Though I will return to my lover. >He is my lessor half after all. >I can feel it near. He is alive on the earth below. her motivation to exist: meeting Discord and become his eternal girlfriend
>Always speaking in their riddles and trying to sound like wise sages. >They always would pout and be mad. Trying to hold me by a mortal based morality. her motifs to be angry towards the other protagonists: four other stars that always act as wise, sages in comparison to her rebellious attitude. This means that the author has established a context for her just to see that Cosmos was born because of corruption, remorse towards the other stars and finally, acknowledging what she likes the most: cause chaos to her pleasure.
