>>5337
>I'm happy with it. I feel it's not very skillfully written, and I hope to improve it sometime, but I feel I nailed the story I wanted to.
yeah well done even though professionals aren´t born but made over the course of making more stories over time. I see that one of these signs consists in making Sombra enjoyable for the fans that you have their attention and enjoying the process of making this story a reality.