Bridgefag, I hate you because you read my mind before I say anything about it and I´ve got to point it out as well...

>>5918
>Such a change would be a shock to anyone and I'd imagine their mental well being would be put into question for awhile.
>The guards leaving really felt too abrupt but I can't be sure if that is do to some reason that would make sense later.
eeeeyup I have to agree with these comments

>All and all this sequence I really can't offer that much else of an opinion on it's own as a lot of things could be made or broken with more information on the story.
also this because it doesn´t seem that there is some kind of subtlety hidden except for the conversation given later. Given that this piece is out of context, one can´t tell if certain sentences will pay off later.

In order to back up why this critique arises is that in the story, it goes like this:
>>5898
>Then just as suddenly the three officers must have decided they were currently outclassed, as they all jumped into the air.
so even the writer acknowledges and is completely that the guards are leaving in the blink of an eye but their motivation was left unclear here. This is the part that confuses me the most because why would they leave the two friends there if they had an unfriendly conversation? That is to say, what were the actual motifs for those stallions? Here is why this becomes a little bit hard to judge this moment for itself but you wrote this completely aware of it so I suppose that later in the story, the reader would find out in the next chapters.