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>Do you have any fics that are newer that I could see to compare?

if you scroll up in this thread, you'll see discussions of my Conversion Bureau piece, although I don't remember now how big of a segment I posted and it's kind of just in the middle.

On & off again I go back to working on First Courier, an FoE piece that Nymphanon from 8ch helped me greatly with. As with so many of my written works it just gets somewhere north of 50,000 words and ... stops.
But if you really wanted to see it I could fish it out.
Attached is a random page from vaguely near the start, to give you an idea of some of the differences.