>>7778
So it wasn't a full thing but just a concept? Sorry, didn't read some of the earlier posts.

>>7780
>Meandering?
Probably the whole story. I see where they maybe coming from but I've seen many insane longfics that jump around get praise so I don't think he should really be concerned much.

> grammar and spelling.
I bet they were britbongs now that I think about it.