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>That's not how kirin magic works
<So, interesting, Anon, and I presume mankind in general in this setting is more familiar with kirins then ponydom.


>Roasting thinks about her beer & whiskey equipment.
>Her dad dumped out the mash in a fit of rage.
I am slightly confused by the jumping back and forth in POV, though I presume this is do to the formatting of you trying to cram this all into three posts.
<She wants to make wine, but her Dad won't let her live the dream.

>The human shrugged, mumbled something about sleeping in the woods.
>Friends of the whitetail? Surely even this creature doesn't sleep in the Everfree.
Was Anon mumbling about sleeping with friends of whitetail? As in he was trying to deceive Hobs on where he was sleeping. Might want to switch these lines around if that was the case. Which I presume is, because:
>The human really did mean the Everfree.

>Hops catches the sadness in its face as the human adds,
"They're my inheritance from my mother."