Anon
08/31/2021 (Tue) 04:41:32
No.7825
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>>7821>No. Sorry, did you read the g-doc where I laid out the setting? I think I did but it was awhile ago so I forgot. Sorry.
> that's just how women are put together so get your mind out of the gutter andTo be fair to myself, I thought that was anon being crass and endearing in his own way and I didn't catch that till I read the first part here. The fact that is completely innocent makes me feel kind of bad for your character, as it is a cute name regardless.
>The "inn's" proprietor has been burned to a pile of ash, with just the hooves and a bit of forelock falling outside the circle of destruction. Okay, that makes sense. Part of the problem is me reviewing this without full context of the story it seems.
>>7799>If it squicks the natives that much, they'll assume nothing is actually happening.>So long as the pair don't give the impression anything more is happening.>The door bursts open. Intruding on the private room are two white pegasi>Wearing metal uniforms.>"We're her about some noise complaints." The one on the left all but demands.>"Come outside right now." the one to your right adds.>"We need to talk to you about what happened last night."
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