>>8058
This >>8059
>Someone like that can walk a fine line between unforgivably awful and very entertaining. The idea of them having to appease such a character is a entertaining premise that I think can work.
Jack almost raping AJ and then TS have to cuddle him was awful:
>He tried to Rape AJ
>Twilight is like, hmmmmmmmmmmm, no shock no horror at AJ's death
>Has to non sexual sleep with him and they cuddle
Even though Twi expresses a little sadness later in the night she doesn't have the right amount of anger and horror at the situation, was a painful read, not all elements though. For contrast I found when he was partying in Celestia's body funny and a actually a little cleaver.

I have some holiday plans so I can't do a full dissection—if I dare attempt—but I have to ask, what inspired some of the more estoric imagery in this? Like Trixie's dream vision thing in page 38?