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BNWO Chronicles Nero Domitius 04/15/2020 (Wed) 14:14:10 [Preview] No. 47

Hey cucks, bulls, snowbunnies and everything in between.
Here's chapter 1 in a series I'm starting called the BNWO Chronicles. Apologies for the heavy intro, I promise it is pornographic and later chapters will have less exposition, but I had to introduce a decent amount of info and characters.
I'm looking for feedback, any comments really, but just knowing the few of you here will see it is good enough. Hope you enjoy!
Also, the main character April is based on this girl. Let me know what you all think!

https://pastebin.com/YQ34Kus1

Anonymous 04/15/2020 (Wed) 20:10:44 [Preview] No.48 del

Just a personal opinion, but I feel some audio dialog during the fucking would be good, like a few "ooh~"s and "Ahh~"s if you get what I mean, helps make the scene more real I feel.

Anonymous 04/16/2020 (Thu) 00:51:18 [Preview] No.49 del

>>48
Interesting. I might try that in the next couple of chapters. Iirc, I try to describe the sounds, but I could totally add some more direct uses of the sounds. Thanks!

Anonymous 06/07/2020 (Sun) 01:56:50 [Preview] No.56 del

Chapter 2!
https://pastebin.com/yJpTSq99

Anonymous

08/17/2021 (Tue) 22:23:36 [Preview] No.301 del

>>47
>>56
I hope you saved the stories elsewhere faggot, pastebin removed them all

Anonymous

12/29/2021 (Wed) 20:06:59 [Preview] No.309 del

Bump up

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