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Anon 06/13/2016 (Mon) 00:22:11 [Preview] No. 195 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
kill all niggeres



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Anon 03/08/2016 (Tue) 20:34:58 [Preview] No. 123 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
Cute horse
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Anon 05/19/2016 (Thu) 19:28:49 [Preview] No. 165 [X] del >>166
first landmark of my faggotry on the /End/


Anon 05/20/2016 (Fri) 00:50:25 [Preview] No. 166 [X] del >>174
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>>165
Let's keep boopin and see what happens.


Anon 05/21/2016 (Sat) 18:56:05 [Preview] No. 174 [X] del >>180
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>>166
oy m8 you like to live dangerously.

Roll for your destiny.
1-2 image A
3-4 B
5-6 C


Anon 05/24/2016 (Tue) 20:48:38 [Preview] No. 180 [X] del >>194
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>>174
>1,2,3,4,5,6

>Be me,
>get zero

I think I win.

Do I win a qt3.14159 Anthrohorse?


Anon 06/07/2016 (Tue) 19:21:48 [Preview] No. 194 [X] del
>>180
>"0"

This is lyra we were talking about, not Pinkie... it was a simple dice roll.. this shouldn't have happened

I guess yes you do win



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Anon 05/24/2016 (Tue) 18:50:11 [Preview] No. 178 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
Writefags, untie!

Remember to use commas good it can save a life lets eat grandma.

I sometimes get around to critiquing other's writing, so in the interest of "build it & they will come" I'm putting up a writer's thread, #1/? because Celly knows how fast these threads autosage.

Allow me to start it off with an outline I've never converted into a story. Part of it is because it would require a lot of mental effort I didn't have to devote to the topic -- and partly, when on IRC or the like and suggested it, was met with revulsion at human/pony interactions.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/18qSQnKKRegOVns-gSNwLkEDH9IH6ZDnPcslrzGvdpTk/edit?usp=sharing

What would you like to talk about, on the topic of writing? I'll try to actually answer it!


How Many Words Should a Sentence Have? Anon 05/24/2016 (Tue) 20:27:33 [Preview] No. 179 [X] del >>181
This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

Attributed to Gary Provost


Anon 05/24/2016 (Tue) 20:49:28 [Preview] No. 181 [X] del
>>179
more like GAY Provost xDDD


Anon 05/31/2016 (Tue) 23:41:51 [Preview] No. 188 [X] del >>189
Someone just told me that greentext (their first exposure) prevented the reader from connecting with the characters.

As a writer (and avide reader of only-) character driven, 1st-person POV works, this friend "couldn't do" greentext.

Another friend said it gives them a headache.
>Be me
>Be 17yo girl

"Well, I'm neither" they would reply
And stop reading because it made their head hurt too much.

What do you say in response to someone who "wants to connect with the characters" ?


Anon 06/02/2016 (Thu) 15:49:38 [Preview] No. 189 [X] del
>>188
huh



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Anon 05/26/2016 (Thu) 16:44:22 [Preview] No. 182 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts] >>183
Is this where you post yamyams?


Anon 05/26/2016 (Thu) 20:03:32 [Preview] No. 183 [X] del
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>>182
Did you know, Rare Donk, that in Japan you can find beer brewed from yams?

It's blue. Like your balls.


Anon 05/30/2016 (Mon) 12:59:51 [Preview] No. 185 [X] del
yes


Anon 05/30/2016 (Mon) 19:05:40 [Preview] No. 186 [X] del >>187
whats a yamyams?


Anon 05/30/2016 (Mon) 22:36:33 [Preview] No. 187 [X] del
>>186
>whats a yamyams?

It is merely sufficient to say you are not, and nothing further need be said.



Anon 05/17/2016 (Tue) 22:18:28 [Preview] No. 163 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
References in MLP.



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MOTHERFUCKING COOKING Anon 01/19/2016 (Tue) 01:06:45 [Preview] No. 77 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts] >>160
ARE YOU BAD ENOUGH TO BAKE A CAKE THAT CAN SAVE THE PRINCESSES AND STOP THE HIATUS?


Anon 01/19/2016 (Tue) 05:15:03 [Preview] No. 78 [X] del
ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS


Anon 01/19/2016 (Tue) 15:31:59 [Preview] No. 79 [X] del
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Couldn't they think up something besides my grandma's recipe? its like they're not even trying.


Anon 05/17/2016 (Tue) 17:43:29 [Preview] No. 159 [X] del
A slice of sharp cheddar on warm apple pie.

This will exceed cake.


Anon 05/17/2016 (Tue) 17:53:27 [Preview] No. 160 [X] del
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>>77

While I acknowledge your repeating digits, your pie is a little bitch.



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Anon 04/26/2016 (Tue) 00:19:11 [Preview] No. 126 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
You will never have a human wifeu.



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Anon 01/13/2016 (Wed) 14:31:14 [Preview] No. 58 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts] >>228
From /v/


Anon 01/14/2016 (Thu) 01:43:23 [Preview] No. 59 [X] del
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I posted this on /v/ in response, but it would seem even this /v/ is faggot infested as it seems to have been deleted.

gg no re


Anon 01/25/2016 (Mon) 02:40:29 [Preview] No. 92 [X] del
y-you too


Anon 12/07/2016 (Wed) 13:04:13 [Preview] No. 228 [X] del
>>58
fake and gay, as expected of OP the faggot.



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Aponymous 01/11/2016 (Mon) 21:34:03 [Preview] No. 18 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
FUCKING MACHINES


Aponymous 01/11/2016 (Mon) 21:43:02 [Preview] No. 19 [X] del >>20>>83
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I one day hope I can trick a pony into thinking that I am a machine.
I will use this as a way to leverage myself into a position where they're just ok with me fucking them because they think I am a robot.
Then, I will slowly have them become emotionally attached to me as many people do with objects that can talk back to them
And finally, once they can't live without me, I will have secured my waifu.
Its the perfect plan.

I am also hinging on the fact that she's a retard to pull this off.


Aponymous 01/11/2016 (Mon) 21:47:29 [Preview] No. 20 [X] del
>>19
wewlad


Anon 01/20/2016 (Wed) 04:51:47 [Preview] No. 83 [X] del >>85
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>>19
>Weeks left
UNTIL WHAT
is she going to be okay?


Anon 01/20/2016 (Wed) 06:42:11 [Preview] No. 84 [X] del
test


Anon 01/20/2016 (Wed) 16:50:11 [Preview] No. 85 [X] del
>>83
I actually have no idea what the weeks are for, I wonder the same thing from time to time. Weeks until he has to leave equestria or some shit porbably



Anon 01/17/2016 (Sun) 23:28:55 [Preview] No. 71 [Reply] [X] [Last 50 Posts]
Hello there qts!


Anon 01/17/2016 (Sun) 23:32:55 [Preview] No. 72 [X] del
Ooy