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I Saw The /Sun/ Anon 08/15/2018 (Wed) 15:32:19 [Preview] No. 1857 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
PRINCESS CELESTIA OFFICIAL /END/ THREAD

Like a phoenix, she gets revived until the end of our days. The first princess to appear into this generation, the first princess who started the wild ride back in December 2017 and the one who will see our paths ending.

Call her majesty, call her princess, call her mentor of harmony, call her troll or just call her Celestia. She is raising the sun everyday, always there to shine in front of us with loyalty.

This is the first official thread dedicated to her. Post any pics, greens or content related about her (her sister is welcome as well) by following these two rules:

1.One image per post if possible so we appreciate any picture of her more than posting them all at once.
2. Always follow this line:

=PRAISE THE SUN==

And so, a new thread, a new day begins...
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Anon 08/21/2018 (Tue) 07:16:43 [Preview] No.1882 del
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>>1877
>The first princess that replied and gave a smile...
>Praise her.

I should meme her more honor of that, for she being the sun princess, was the initial spark for this place. Praise the sun indeed!


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>>1877
I'm still working on my OC bomb, though I'm considering just spitting it into smaller batches and posting it when it gets ready. In anycase, providing that nothing else weird happens this week (no ER trips, pitbull attacks, colds, etc). I should have something significant up in the next 3 or 4 days.


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This pic is interesting. There a huge disparity in the styles of the pony, magic around her horn, and the golden aura in the background. I first thought this pic was just an unskilled artist, but the celestia doesn't look half bad if he was going for a cartoony style and the magic symbol around the horn actually looks pretty nice, if he had stuck to one style I think it would look better.


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Be watchful of blue maned celestia's. Don't bother editing any or anythinng like that because I'm not sure if I ever get around to it but if you ever find some while your normally browsing post or giv me link, as I have a small project in mind tat I may do sometimes.



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Anon 02/11/2018 (Sun) 15:06:57 [Preview] No. 678 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
I know it's not fair that I do this but sometimes I think good quality images are not going to be eternal. Someday we will arrive to Deviantart core quality and we all know what that means.

However,I can solve a little bit their colours. It's artificial yes but at least,those edits make it pleasant to the eye and serve to post something between the good ones. These two have like 10 upvotes or so and I am putting in the thumbnail which ones are edited.I can link them perfectly though.
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Anon 08/18/2018 (Sat) 22:29:01 [Preview] No.1875 del
>>1867
>so sadly won't be posting my planned OC bomb yet. Though it isn't the most physically draining task in the world it is a bit of a hassle since I still have some minor adjustments to prepare for (finding pics, finishing a couple of edits).
take your time. Part of the charm of my fics was editing the images a little bit as well just to find the perfect ambient and pics to reflect the intentions of the fic.We are too used to seeing so many greens written in /mlp/ because a lot of anons write or two or three writefags alternate between each other. What happens in the process is ordinary, that hassle usually comes when it requires some effort or takes time to apply it correctly. That looks like a good sign.

>Though I have been pleasantly surprised by my lazing around with this one picture so I post something today!
alright, sometimes going for the alternative thing brings something else into your ideas. Speaking of new, I think I have to develop the reviews of criticizing art, despite that I am much better reviewing albums than art. But oh well, let´s think and post some reflections onto your edits.


Anon 08/18/2018 (Sat) 22:54:48 [Preview] No.1876 del
>>1867
so, let´s begin the reviews. I don´t usually rate save when things are too obvious in the eyes of everyone. So I comment more my thoughts and imagine the reasons or background that you have had the intentions to follow and apply.

So the edits seem to go into the destructive direction. It seems that the first one is transitional. Not a full edit nor displays all the things you could bring on the table. It gets darker and the pixelated/blurred parts are spotty, way less chaotic than mine.
The image has a clear dissonance and you can tell that something is going wrong (the sun, her cutie mark and parts of her body). The title stars unsettle me a little bit though.
Fuck I didn´t notice that she didn´t have cutie mark in the original. That´s surprising and has confused me until writing this post to the very end.

>>1868
First edit thoughts: that sense of her having a cutie mark fades a little more and looks more like an integral part of her body. The distorted pixels make sense in her body and the mane gets a new life from this one onwards. Have not much complaints about this one because it sets up for the final one. It´s the least interesting one though because the purple body doesn´t fit that much into my eye.

Second edit thoughts: Way cooler than the first edit, her body color is not as saturated as in the previous pic, it rewards and makes a contrast with her necklace, crown and even the sun cutie mark properly painted after editing it. Also the sun has less force so it feels more pleasant or less tiring to look at. Comfort between the chaos. You could have just posted this one as the official one and I would believe it.

Third edit: So here we are using a filter. You may not know what you have made here but I will tell you one thing: this could be used in the artwork of any black metal album. Ignoring the fact that ponies trigger people and are feminine at first sight, this one reminds me of Darkthrone or Burzum album covers (and I am not going too far). That monochrome filter usually has its own acceptance in fact (like pic related with 126 upvotes) and it´s the easiest to look at.

I rate this as a black metal wallpaper out of 10. Truly we are reaching the end of demonic evils.


Anon 08/18/2018 (Sat) 23:19:14 [Preview] No.1877 del
>>1870
final edit: going from pink to a dark purple body because you have shadowed it more than the previous one. At the same time, the golden regalia(I know those shoes have a name but I haven´t figured it out) has transformed into a vibrant color of flames. They are purely reflecting the sun and it seems that the obscurity makes Celestia look absolutely isolated. Like the sun it´s the only light which illuminates her soul but not enough to get inside her body. This one is better because the pink that irritated me a little bit is gone. The color follows a more natural rhythm within her mane(especially the upper part) and in her legs. The blurred stars make more sense in this one.

I still don´t know which one I should pick, either the second edit or your favorite. Though I have to admit that the monochrome edit could surprise more than one outsider out there.

Now, about with the absolute destruction...
>>1871
>it is a destruction of art thing going for it. It doesnt look appealin in the slightest but it is visually interesting a bit. Like it could go somewhere if treated with care.
I will say that those filters could be pretty fitting if used with care indeed. It´s way more chaotic than it should because that destruction doesn´t seem to follow a pattern. It´s partially appealing if you look at the green parts, looking like a creepy skeleton with those green wings and face and with the black filter, you are using it as a psychedelic contrast like the body is between the space.
I think the main problem is that the body is cut in half and only her hooves shows Celestia. Her mane delivers those vibes of space.

My advice is that when you are using strong filters, destruction could be as equally chaotic as the direct ones but they could go with a softer contrast or pattern to connect them instead of feeling like a completely random collage.

It gives the same distortion while bringing those two concepts of the filters. When you get into the point that they match somehow, that´s where the destruction comes to play. Even destruction asks for some requirements to be destroyed sometimes.

The image has some energy located in some spots (her face or the mane and tail constellations) but something is in the middle of the road.

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Anon 08/21/2018 (Tue) 05:12:25 [Preview] No.1879 del
>>1877
>I still don´t know which one I should pick, either the second edit or your favorite. Though I have to admit that the monochrome edit could surprise more than one outsider out there.
The monochrome one looks pretty cool honestly. I love the colors of my favorite but that one may be the best from a more objective standpoint, as the small pixelated looking areas go with it better as oppose to looking like an error on >>1870

>I will say that those filters could be pretty fitting if used with care indeed. It´s way more chaotic than it should because that destruction doesn´t seem to follow a pattern. It´s partially appealing if you look at the green parts, looking like a creepy skeleton with those green wings and face and with the black filter, you are using it as a psychedelic contrast like the body is between the space.
Yeah, I ran it through a cloud filter to generate cloundy effect (don't eve remember what the other fiter was as I was feeling rather lousy that day), a rather lousy cloud effect that just blured things in an odd foggy fashion, the starte messing with the colors and such. I wasn't really aiming for anything because I was just messing around seeing what would happen. I may try to see if I can get that green again though.

>It gives the same distortion while bringing those two concepts of the filters. When you get into the point that they match somehow, that´s where the destruction comes to play. Even destruction asks for some requirements to be destroyed sometimes.
When going into standards of appeal perfectly agree, as your still trying to aim for something cool and or at least interesting, this just looks somewhat random thing of mixed quality. That's the problem with a lot of these current post-art or whatever else they call themselves artist and intellectuals not saying all of them are like this and I think they are a bit over represented in some places that people say they've taken over . Even when they scream subjectivity in response to all criticism they often have no way to have any sort of standard, with at worst being being just hypocritical when they turn around and call something else garbage or at the most refined defining how art must be "not art" and or a cynical commentary on all that came before it and nothing else. Even with the most subjective view on art there is still metrics you can to judge something (does it hold up to the artist intent of what he wants to convey? if he rejects aesthetic appeal as an aim then what is still there? if he says its only for personal satisfaction then why does he want people to analyze it if he doesn't view criticism as valid?). That's my problem though too with things though; I'm not sure what my standard is or if I'm being too soft on something because I enjoyed it and that's my only standard and wondering if I'm overlooking any flaws.


Anon 08/21/2018 (Tue) 05:59:05 [Preview] No.1880 del
>>1855
>I am surprised that you feel that darkness within the picture because I wasn´t having the best day, thinking about I could do in the future with my life.
Perhaps some of your mood shifted into your work? though with the feels you describe, it sounds similar to how I have felt before i the not too distant past. Each day was a step forward into nowhere, I felt like was just going through the motions with no plan which then lead to my rigid schedule and no fun allowed attitude...

>I was asking myself what the fuck I was doing, it didn´t make sense to me around that time.
This when taking into account your not so good day reminds me of myself several years ago and still a tiny bit today like you had to justify everything you did and simple little pass times like that were a waste of time compared to preparing you future. Not saying that I have ya figured out or I'm trying to play shrink, it just reminds me very strongly of sentiments I had and still have a little bit Again, a lot of stuff I've touched on before.

>I cannot deny that. Is it commercial for a visual piece though?
I don't know. I often had growing up numerous different things that I did little bits of because of mood but never finished, because it was only an expression of a certain feel t a certain time. though maybe with work and a little discipline things like that could go somewhere.



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Season 8 Thread Anon 03/24/2018 (Sat) 21:04:36 [Preview] No. 1060 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
It deserves a proper thread for the episodes that will come instead of using the main generals. Any discussion for the show especially season 8 and 9, is preferably posted in this thread.
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>>1839
we love you too, anon.


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>>1836
>Oh boy, you have to end that Cadence fic because while you think you are more of a joking shitposting anon that doesn´t take things seriously, those greens felt inmmersive and for sure, reading the whole product at once will boost that immersion. If you ever post that one, add yourself a name or trip because it´s by far, the most serious work you have been writing so far.
Though it hasn't been moving at a fast pace, it hasn't been forgotten.

>That break you have taken will help a lot.
If you are taking a Mareathon, then I suppose the reviews will consist between A Matter of Principals until The End in Friend.
Working on it. I'll think towards the /end/ of the week I'll have the reviews up unless something else comes up unbeknownst to me.

>And yes, it sounds like we are going through interesting episodes to judge and look forward.
Even if things suck it still could be fun analysis how they suck, same for the comic.

>>1837
>Also, did you create the Ponyvania thread in /mlp/? Because they have recently noticed about the game as well
Nope, only briefly checked in once this week so far, nice they are noticing it though. There should be at least a few oldfags who remember the game in its earlier development back in 2012 that maybe surprised to see it alive like I was.

>Anyway, the gesture is welcome but moderation kind of sucks even though you have all the tools for you. it´s really hard to be a good moderator, especially in these sites.
Well, will talk about more later, once I get things a bit more sorted out with everything that has happened this year I would be interested in it, especially to help you, even if its just being vanguard on /next/.


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Anon 08/15/2018 (Wed) 14:16:52 [Preview] No.1852 del
>>1848
>it hasn't been forgotten.
that´s nice to hear
>I'll have the reviews up unless something else comes up unbeknownst to me.
I will have to watch them as well on Saturday, not sure if I will have them prepared though.

>still could be fun analysis how they suck, same for the comic.
yeah, agreed. Even with the worst episode, the fandom has always brought a few things that are enjoyable despite its quality. Not all the episodes are going to be bad anyway.

>There should be at least a few oldfags who remember the game in its earlier development back in 2012 that maybe surprised to see it alive like I was.
indeed. One anon exclaimed that it was about time they released it because they had everything prepared save the final boss. Others are enjoying it so far, so that thread has sparked a little bit of interest.

>once I get things a bit more sorted out with everything that has happened this year I would be interested in it, especially to help you, even if its just being vanguard on /next/.
well thanks. Even though I don´t know if I have that much of an interest for the /next/; if you are interested, I will follow. It doesn´t have any rules established and one rule that I value the most is: no spamming, nor flooding nor anything that prevents the normal activity of the site. Believe it or not, even when you have the freedom of expression, there are faggots who abuse too much their own liberties. That site has improved a bit in terms of their settings but there are a few unwritten problems there as well. I have left it as a standstill project as for now. The /end/ however, since the change of their servers and /sp/´s withdrawal has tried to put more effort.
As you said, we will see.


Anon 08/18/2018 (Sat) 23:39:56 [Preview] No.1878 del
>Me on saturday
>had watched A Matter of Principals and A Hearths´Warming Club
>alright, let´s rewatch them and watch Friendship Univerty and The End in Friend next
>fine, let´s jump into the marathon as said here
>I had heard these episode save HeartsWarming were compared with Non Compete Clause, especially Principals and The End In Friend
>expect to have a rollercoaster of emotions and probably rage quitting any of those

>watch A Matter of Principals
>hey,it´s not as bad as I remembered. Discord has gone a bit backwards into his character but Dolores delivers a good message in the end. A fine one, better than the first watch.

>see Heart´s Warming Club
>no problems with this one, it´s great and I knew it.

>watch Friendship University
>oh an episode about corrupted business,propaganda and copyright data
>Twilight goes full CSI, Rarity is a fun infiltrator and they had tricked Starwswirl.
>a nice song from the Flim Flam brothers

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not much Tournevis 12/19/2016 (Mon) 09:42:11 [Preview] No. 233 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
not much activity around here
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Anon 08/09/2018 (Thu) 07:33:40 [Preview] No.1812 del
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>>1811
Proof of Life shitpost as well. Week has been pretty busy. Good news is that I have a fair bit of half finshed OC updates and an edit that wouldn't take too long to get ready when I find the time. Need to catch up with this season to.


Anon 08/10/2018 (Fri) 22:11:44 [Preview] No.1824 del
>>1812
>Week has been pretty busy.
the bad news
>Good news is that I have a fair bit of half finshed OC updates and an edit that wouldn't take too long to get ready when I find the time. Need to catch up with this season to.
oh original content. Hype,hype,hype...


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I could have been posting something tonight but I think you have enough things to reply.
Proof of life shitpost instead with a certain announcement. I am opening a new thread pretty soon about a special character that you certainly like (pic unrelated as a hint).

Not sure how active it will be but for sure, it's taking the /end/ with a great gallery to fill the void....

I will leave it at that. As for now,I am taking a comfortable seat preparing the images.


Anon 08/14/2018 (Tue) 10:25:09 [Preview] No.1842 del
>>1841
Post whenever ya want. I can just reply ta stuff later. Its not overwheming for me. Today was busy, but i'l probably have some post up by tommorow.

> I am opening a new thread pretty soon about a special character that you certainly like (pic unrelated as a hint).
I have a sight guess, but i also wanna be surprised, so I won't think too hard on it. I have a gif, though a smallish one that I have been working on for you too, panning to post it with my planned OC later this week


Anon 08/15/2018 (Wed) 14:26:29 [Preview] No.1853 del
>>1842
>I have a sight guess, but i also wanna be surprised, so I won't think too hard on it.
get ready for it because it´s coming. I have been reuniting good material to post over here the last two days and I think I can open it.

TEST
if you want to take a wild guess, the title of this link should serve and I am posting it as well as a headline.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=WVRK5heoMB8 [Embed]

>I have been working on for you too, panning to post it with my planned OC later this week
I don´t usually expect material from anybody dedicated to me. It´s harder for me to say thanks than being disappointed...

Still, even when I receive a gift, it means that I still have to put effort on something else in order to feel better, even though appreciating these details during the road and making a stop for them is fine as well.



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Comic thread Anon 07/05/2018 (Thu) 13:10:15 [Preview] No. 1627 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Maybe we could use the /end/ for archiving comics and check them out if we are bored or we have nothing else to post for hiatuses or dead periods.

As far the way a comic should be posted, instead of posting 5 images in just one post, I think it should fit a balance: 1 image for the first (the cover) and then two pages, feeling like you are a reading a physical one.
I am posting Tempest´s one for now but yayponies has all of them and we can share some opinions or make them visible over here...just because.

Anyway, here it goes.
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Anon 08/10/2018 (Fri) 08:05:22 [Preview] No.1815 del
>>1769
I honestly am hyped for this one. though even if it sucks do to the curious mix it still could be of interest.


Anon 08/10/2018 (Fri) 22:07:20 [Preview] No.1823 del
>>1815
the dynamic will be fairly interesting. I have read Whitley´s interview and while I always expect every new comic to be shit, he has shown himself to be pretty excited making this arc.


Anon 08/11/2018 (Sat) 00:45:25 [Preview] No.1830 del
It tells ya somethng that even with Whitley I'm stil pretty hyped. Though it's good to be questioning, especially with him...


Anon 08/12/2018 (Sun) 20:51:55 [Preview] No.1835 del
>>1830
in theory, it should start around October, so the comics are going to complement the series and serve us for the hiatus. Fingers crossed though...


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>>1835
Fingers crossed indeed. Though even if they do mess it up I hope they do it in unique way as opposed to just being stupid OCC with lazy writing and/or some background agenda like they usually do. (not just talking about being slightly SJW, but a writer wanting to prove a point with a character or something)



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Anon 01/04/2018 (Thu) 23:45:03 [Preview] No. 400 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
How about some old maymays GET?
I should propably stop stealing them as well.
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>>1704
>"That isn't the most helpfull but that's a start. Who is exactly is Dolores and how do you relate to all this?"


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>"Wow you really don't know about things here do ya?"
>"Though you could be pulling my leg... how could you not know who Dolores is?!" Pinkie Pie said with a knowing smirk


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>>1747
>"That name is unfamiliar to me."


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>>1748
>"You know, formally evil bully Pony who became Twilight friendship student but gradualtited within a year and now is just hanging around? Master bridge builder?"


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>>1748
Luna? Hello? To Where and Back Again?

>>1749
Thanks Pinkie



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Anon 04/08/2016 (Fri) 23:28:10 [Preview] No. 125 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Every weekday we watch Ghost over an the The Horse Reich. Be sure to click the CyTube link fags.
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Anon 07/16/2018 (Mon) 21:32:16 [Preview] No. 1714 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
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Anon 01/14/2016 (Thu) 01:45:36 [Preview] No. 60 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Applejack is my favorite pony, who is your favorite pony?
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>>610
it's ironic. When things deliver love,they don't love them. In reverse,they give a lot of praise and heartwarming feels and they do not represent love at all.

I've noticed this pattern several times. But hey,there is some love behind her after all.


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>>60
all of them!


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>>1678
It worked...


Anon 07/09/2018 (Mon) 21:37:24 [Preview] No.1693 del
>>1679
yeah, it worked. I have tested that with the same picture 4 three threads and I wanted to you to see that the change has been made. Mods have listened.

Now, the thing is if we decide to change the bridge word filter at some point when more anons come here and we have to discuss the mascot.

We will see but for now, the R9K message is gone, we can re post what´s been missing after the image disaster.



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The thread of a personal project Anon L23 02/10/2018 (Sat) 06:06:53 [Preview] No. 656 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
>What is this thread about?
Talking about how it feels to be in the /end/. The darkest place where no one comes.
>What is this project about the so called end?
Difficult to know, but when no one is watching,you act differently. I have a project in mind about that aspect for this thread.
>How is it going to last?
Either very few posts (10 or so) or a very long one.
>Does it have any purpose?
Basically my thoughts about some things transferred into a pony body. Nothing that fits completely on character or my full personal attention to get "fame". Just a guide or vision I want to share in a grey place. Several threads have pointed them out but I especifically want to focus on something else inspired from those first posts.

Nothing is planned and I can't promise anything....
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Anon 06/20/2018 (Wed) 07:26:25 [Preview] No.1561 del
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>>1559
>What I was doing was trying to post a bit of a test shitpost before I tried typing out my review. Got several errors and then it woudn't connect so I just gave up that day.
Alright,perfect then. I thought you had the review written and it went to waste....mostly because I have had to repeat a couple of long posts and I could have given up those times that happened to me.

>I enjoyed the detail with it and it's one of the things that drew me in personally. Such description I can understand being seen as a negative though there are many well received fics I know of that do efforts such as this and sometimes even get praise for being descriptive in such a way. Though I've seen others make minimalism work just as well. A lot of it comes down to style and taste
It really depends,those factors are not something that the writer takes the absolute control. For many,descriptions are like filler and for other,it becomes an absolute pleasure,almost like fetish,reading and imagining slowly how the things are. Not rushed nor forced,just some imaginary peace. Those who get the action right,they can do it in very few words and end up astounding.
In first person however,when I had to tell the story from a personal and inclusive perspective,I had the sense to include more descriptions than the usual story because there are thoughts and a feel of a personal journey. The character lives in it and while I had the initial intentions to do it as somewhat meta,the meta was focused onto her thoughts.
Again,descriptions are not a big problem for me. I have had more trouble in finding what I wanted to write about than that. I could have expanded it in Celestia's reactions but it would have too much.
In the end,it's pretty subjective. You have enjoyed so at least,there is that.

>Dolores be with us!
She will be there.


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>>1560
>I have found myself trying to fit everything into the timeline more than attempting to write a love story....for some reason. I spent more time in finding this concept than writing and describing it.
Hey, as long as your satisfied with it. I'm a sucker for background details and headcanon as well.

>It's indeed quite possibly the most fitting lyrics I have put on a fic and add another layer to them.
I think it's because, at least in part, to how these lines, at least in isolation for how we have taken them, are being taken to somewhat uncommon places in terms to what the public consciousness thinks of them. Say, a divorce being portrayed as simply not working out rather than one side being a victim to infidelity or abuse like ho many times it's betrayed. Most songs, movies, popular media in general tend to have someone as an antagonist, while this, however briefly and subtly, hit on a frustration of something being sucky situation without anything really to attribute the failure of things, or any clare cut person to blame. No time to point to where you can say it went wrong.

>It's real and how many times I haven't gone out because of studies. Well,that analogy could come from there.
I get this very much so, though it is a differet thing than studies that caused the feeling. Several factors actually. Not going to go into it, but I've had this feel a lot before.

>That fic had a really emotional song behind,a really developed setup and a very emotional climax. It's hard to beat that and I,while feeling proud of receiving good ratings,it could be all downhill from here...I wonder how I am going to impress you or even keep the level in the future.
I am really not sure how to rate these fics to be honest. How much is my personal enjoyment and how much should be what I consider a good structured, good written story. Also, such number ratings too can mean different things to different people; a 6 outta 10 for one person could mean enjoyable but unremarkable, while to another can mean just above meritocracy. I have a split personality as well of how to rate things as I am often split on what metrics I even should use or how to even to judge what a metric is that make sense. Your first early stuff would probably be a 6 range to me, not out of anything wrong but that it was just a simple little story. I think you Radiance fic is centianly above 8 for sure, along with this one. I enjoyed your Luna and Celestia fics at a level at nearly at 9, but if I were going to take into account structure I may have to knock a couple of points off. I really not sure how to rate them well. in anycase, don't feel pressured on my behalf to impress me. I really enjoy things little and big and if I did rate something lower it wouldn't necessarily be bad, besides this is a place to experiment and offer feedback without all the fear of a massive blacklash.


Anon 06/21/2018 (Thu) 21:31:31 [Preview] No.1563 del
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>>1561
>Alright,perfect then. I thought you had the review written and it went to waste....mostly because I have had to repeat a couple of long posts and I could have given up those times that happened to me.

I am well antiquated with giving up after technology and my own forgetfulness erased something I was working on. Wouldn't blame ya for ever doing so.

>She will be there.
She and her bridges are version of the force at this point.


Anon 06/22/2018 (Fri) 22:20:49 [Preview] No.1576 del
>>1562
>Hey, as long as your satisfied with it. I'm a sucker for background details and headcanon as well.
Well, pretty much for now. I have written what I like. I did it for the first time here, now I repeat it. However, I from the inside, feel to cover something new even if it´s the same theme. Basically the episode and the movie gave the tools, I just tried to mix them and give a point of view that not many would ask for. I mean, who is going to write about the Queen? Same question with Bat Pony Cadence,the most notable fic of yours now that you have rated mine. This is why I felt some apathy while rewriting FiM but I guess that meta element made it different all the way through.

>divorce being portrayed as simply not working out rather than one side being a victim to infidelity or abuse like ho many times it's betrayed
>in general tend to have someone as an antagonist, while this, however briefly and subtly, hit on a frustration of something being sucky situation without anything really to attribute the failure of things, or any clare cut person to blame.
the episode went with both divorced parents chilling and having a nice conversation, not being resentful nor having to blame why it happened. They just got over it and treat themselves as "close contacts" and those things happen. Media overhypes it just for the sake of causing drama all the time. I needed some drama to write this, but it puts the perspective of entertaining the kids while all the transition happens. I give to the Queen some familiar issues to think and challenge her in how she would react and solve the problem.

And as you said, there is no one to blame, they are free to choose where they want to live and nobody, not even the authority, can prevent a personal decision. It happens because hey, not all relationships have the eternal Disney love of living together forever. Novo blames the Storm King because most of her frustrations had to paid in some way and the hippogriffs were going to fight against him personally for it in the initial movie scripts. She cannot blame the event itself because...it´s illogical, a Queen cannot afford to put a bad image on Sky Beak because of his decision.

>it is a differet thing than studies that caused the feeling. Several factors actually.
yeah, it´s just that they are combined in order to contribute the story with that detail. Sometimes the idea is not what is wrong but the way to transfer it into the story and it doesn´t fit in the best moment.

>Your first early stuff would probably be a 6 range to me, not out of anything wrong but that it was just a simple little story.
yeah, they were there to fill the board. It´s basically me putting random thoughts everywhere using the pony universe.
>I think you Radiance fic is centianly above 8 for sure, along with this one. I enjoyed your Luna and Celestia fics at a level at nearly at 9, but if I were going to take into account structure I may have to knock a couple of points off.
It took me an entire morning for that one and while I certainly wanted to write about bats and darkness, I started with her...ironically.

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Anon 06/22/2018 (Fri) 22:25:29 [Preview] No.1577 del
>>1563
>I am well antiquated with giving up after technology and my own forgetfulness erased something I was working on. Wouldn't blame ya for ever doing so.
I remember most of the stuff I would have been trying to post if that case had happened or at least, a 60% of it.
You will remember it someday whenever the same topic shows up again or not....whatever happens. Just that technique exists and...while I am young, don´t think that I like technology too much. I know the basics in order to surf and fit the average user but nothing else. I don´t see it that interesting.

>She and her bridges are version of the force at this point.
I wonder if she wanted more "force" to her cause though....